Short fic beta please?

[unfeathered]

Is there anyone around who could give a short fic a quick once over for me please? It's only 550 words and shouldn't need anything complicated - I just want to make sure the tenses and the structure work for someone outside my brain!

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[fucktheg0ds]

Sure, I can do it!

[unfeathered]

Awesome, thank you! Can I email it to you (or is there some better newfangled way of doing it these days?)

[fucktheg0ds]

Email works for me!

evealexandria1@outlook.com

[unfeathered]

Thank you - you're a star! :-)

[fucktheg0ds]

You're welcome! I'll look over it in the morning.

[unfeathered]

Thank you so much :-)