Meme!

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Nicked off dune_drd:

Comment with a story I've written, and I will tell you something about the story that didn't make it onto the page.

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[dune-drd.livejournal.com]

Obvious, but still interesting: Master Plan

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*grins* To be honest, you've probably heard most of my thoughts on Master Plan already, because I tend to share them!

But I do have a few snippets of story that haven't made it into the fic and won't now because the point where they'd have fitted is past.

Here you go:

1. For Valentine's Day, I cut out Jack's heart and give it to the Doctor on a silver platter.

2. I'm not stupid enough to think he's going to stay this docile forever. He's too much of a hero for that. But I'm jolly well going to enjoy it while it lasts. And afterwards, I'll enjoy torturing the hell out of him too.

3. (An early version of the strangulation death)

I've got him standing in the middle of his room with his hands chained behind him and a rope around his neck.

His face as I stood on a stool to secure it to the ceiling was just delicious. He knew exactly what was coming. I smiled nastily down at him, really enjoying being able to look *down* at him with him standing up, and gently – oh, so gently – lowered the noose over his head. He stared at me wildly, eyes locked on mine, pulse racing, breathing fast, and swallowed hard. I grinned, and tightened the rope. Got down off the stool, went round behind him and was deep inside him three seconds later, fucking him to the beat of the drums that surged through him.

[lyorn.livejournal.com]

2. I'm not stupid enough to think he's going to stay this docile forever. He's too much of a hero for that. But I'm jolly well going to enjoy it while it lasts. And afterwards, I'll enjoy torturing the hell out of him too.

Interesting, that. I had pondered the way the deal between Jack and the Master is breaking down, and this piece of background where the Master had known it would happen fits in nicely.

[lyorn.livejournal.com]

First of your stories I read: A Little Matter of Life and Death

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Um. I'm not sure I've got anything new to say about that one - have you read my Commentary on it?

I'll have a look at my notes and see if there's anything else...

[lyorn.livejournal.com]

have you read my Commentary on it?

I have. I'm just being greedy ;-)