ext_15312 ([identity profile] fandom-me.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] unfeathered 2007-10-26 09:20 pm (UTC)

There's also issues with repetitive action - a lot of sex toys and many kinks require that kind of thing. You get jarred out of the action and the character because it goes on and on and you have to *Really* watch the pacing and just. Yeah. Fix your POV and it's less an issue, but. IT's still difficult to do well.

And sex toys *Definitely* can cut into the intimacy of the POV.

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